A song my friend wrote

[Smelly Button Ears]

Copy right and patented.

I really hope I heard you guys on the radio one day $$$$

[MandatorySuicide]

That isn't a song.

EDIT: You say you have a band with this guy, so why only post lyrics?

[deadteenager]

Originally Posted by crackhead

i stick my fingers inside and fondle your bowels
enjoying your painful howls

A true poet...

[crackhead]

Originally Posted by MandatorySuicide

That isn't a song.

EDIT: You say you have a band with this guy, so why only post lyrics?

To see if we should even bother with the music for it.

[suck_my_muffin]

Wow, how grindcore.

Edit: Can we get a link to your band page? If not that's cool, I don't think I'd ever link people to my band either.

[E-digger]

To me it sounds like your friend is trying too hard to make it sound graphic and disturbing rather then powerful/meaningful.

In all honesty if I heard someone singing this, I would'nt think they were bad ass, just angsty.

Just my two cents.

The whole thing is kind of corny.

[orangekowsisgay]

You wake up naked in your bed
you wanna stand up but your too tired
covered by blankets

You see me walking,laughing,smiling and such
dont make a fuss
you decide to stop being a bitch
and be happy

CHORUS:This is what you get for being a good person!
This is what you get for being a good person!
im gonna do something ill never regret
This is what you get for being a good person!
This is what you get for being a good person!
soon your gonna be covered happiness!

you walked away from me
because you needed to leave
but unlike you the blowtorch doesnt discriminate
as it welds together random pieces of metal

(SOLO)

Now that your face is just fine
now that you feel good and refreshed
i see your tears and tell you not to cry
honey,its gonna be good, the rest of your life

(CHORUS)

my tongue starts at your clit
caressing up
from your cunt to your chest you feel the vibrations
i stick my fingers inside and make you have a huge orgasm
enjoying your moans of pleasure

One motion and start to fuck you
i look into your cock filled cunt and cum everywhere
then i stick it in your pooper and cum again

[suck_my_muffin]

Originally Posted by orangekowsisgay

You wake up naked in your bed
you wanna stand up but your too tired
covered by blankets

You see me walking,laughing,smiling and such
dont make a fuss
you decide to stop being a bitch
and be happy

CHORUS:This is what you get for being a good person!
This is what you get for being a good person!
im gonna do something ill never regret
This is what you get for being a good person!
This is what you get for being a good person!
soon your gonna be covered happiness!

you walked away from me
because you needed to leave
but unlike you the blowtorch doesnt discriminate
as it welds together random pieces of metal

(SOLO)

Now that your face is just fine
now that you feel good and refreshed
i see your tears and tell you not to cry
honey,its gonna be good, the rest of your life

(CHORUS)

my tongue starts at your clit
caressing up
from your cunt to your chest you feel the vibrations
i stick my fingers inside and make you have a huge orgasm
enjoying your moans of pleasure

One motion and start to fuck you
i look into your cock filled cunt and cum everywhere
then i stick it in your pooper and cum again

fixed.

[ChemicalFormulaLove]

the lyrics were alright i guess, it just seems like he is trying to put a whole bunch of different messages into the song, and its just muddled. if that helps any.

[TruthWielder]

I thought it was pretty good for what it was trying to be. Original, I'll give you that. But hey, cant judge a song without the music.